Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. Others, however, argue that it has only made people busier.
What do you think of when you hear the word “ technology “?
Technology is the application of the new modern life and how the future will be. There are two group of people in this topic, group who said that the technology is an essential to our human life and the other group said that the increasing of using technology is such a waste.
As we observe around, we see that technology is becoming a necessary to our human life and how we deal with our requirements. Also, life is impossible without technology as everyone is dependent on it and it makes our life more easier . Moreover , the modern life is now in every single thing in our life such as: working from home , home study , taking courses and either browsing. As we look around, we can see that technology is throughout. Besides, technology helps in bioengineering researches which help the environment, health and nutrition. Also, it makes the communication among people more easier and faster than in the past decades. Internet has made the knowledge ubiquitous which means that anyone could learn by himself .At the moment, any person who have Internet could subjoin to any online course , so he saves time and effort and maybe the course is free , so he saves money as well.
On the other hand, the evolution of modern technology has disadvantage. It makes the human less productivity because, it’s distract us especially the teenagers and young children who have to study. Besides, they have their mobile phones and their parents allow them to use Internet whenever they want , so they can’t focus on their study. Moreover, adult people in work they can’t achieve their targets owing to using their mobile phone in scrolling on social media and browsing.
To sum up , everything is double edged weapon , so the all humanity can’t agree on one thing . And every side has some points that the majority of us could agree on it , so the ball is in your court whether you are with the first group , so you agree that technology is a
fundamental issue to our future. Neither , you consider that technology could lead to a destruction of humanity. In my own perspective I reckon that technology is a fundamental issue in our life nowadays and personally I imagine that our life couldn’t going easily without technology and modern life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, i reckon, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81108312343 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64950805262 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506297229219 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.9915688434 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166815270904 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547911201952 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437317631499 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797302044898 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457225525894 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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