Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns
and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It has been argued that human should plant more trees rather than construct more buildings in metropolitan areas. Personally, I totally agree with this statement because the merits that this tendency brings back such as better living environment for the citizens, as well as increasing biodiversity amongst plants and animals outweigh its disadvantage.
To commence with, plating more trees can help the eco-system to recover and bring back certain species which have long disappeared from humans’ life. Squirrels can be counted as an example, for a while, they lost their living habitat in cities and towns because trees had been cut down to make way for road and houses. With the reintroduction of such animals, the environment can gradually revise and those creatures can come back to where they belong.
Furthermore, humankind also receive numerous of benefits from the increasing number of plants, especially in terms of health. The green belt creates fresher air for people in urban areas, owing to the carbon dioxide absorption amongst leaves and their magically power to release oxygen into the atmosphere. As the result, the proportion of citizens who get lung diseases may decrease significantly, which means the death rate of people who die from such sickness may drop.
In conclusion, I agree that more greens should be planted in cities and towns, this tendency can not only revise the eco-system but can also improve people’ health
- Two maps show the change of a coastal town called Pentland from 1950 to 2007 100
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people can buy the same products anywhere in the world Do you think this is a positive or negative development 84
- Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world To what extent is this a positive or negative trend 84
- In the modern world it is no longer necessary to use animals for food clothing or medicine To what extent do you agree or disagree disagree 89
- Some people think that the best way to increase road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32188841202 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67615065218 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648068669528 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.7075969198 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.777777778 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167719717418 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715898971121 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824690236904 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10998197116 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619302714442 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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