Some people say that it is possible for a county to be both economically successful and have a clean environment. Others disagree.
Discuss both view and give your opinion.
he strength of any nation does not come without costs, one of which is upon the surroundings whose resources fuel each and every sector of the economy. And yet many believe a strong economy and a clean environment can co-exist. I do not entirely deny this belief; however, I find myself more convinced of the fact that we cannot have them both.
Scientists for years have developed ways to replace traditional sources of exploitation in many fields, like electricity and fuel. Alternatives of using renewable energy from sunlight, wind and geothermal heat have been applied in many places, which keeps the environment away from harm. Besides, many environmental activists say that it is certainly within our reach to minimize the damage caused by industrial activities and protect Mother Earth. Some even succeeded in broaching the subject with the authorities and convincing them to take actions in such regard.
On the other hand, I suppose that a country cannot obtain an advanced economy without damaging the environment in some cases. It is a fact that success in several fields linking to heavy industries strongly contributes to economic growth. Some mechanical industries have to exploit natural resources in order to meet the energy demand. Coal, for example, is being mined in huge quantities for production and fabrication in thermal power plants. Therefore, these mineral resources would face the risk of being depleted. Moreover, the manufacturing process also results in severe pollutions. In details, these industry factories would release the gas emission and other toxic wastes which are detrimental to our environment.
In conclusion, my firm conviction is that no matter how hard we try to preserve the environment while our exploitation of natural resources for the sake of the economy is ongoing, we can never have them both at the same time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24333333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8440561801 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7753644585 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.866666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192366809203 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539354238848 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320668502457 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104080928796 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0252998272278 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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