Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environment problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Some are of the opinion that extinction of specific species and rare animals is the dominant environmental issue of this era, while few are of the view that more significant geographical problems need to be considered. I believe that it is better to focus on other threats which are detriment related to the earth.
Nowadays, rare species and plants are slowly disappearing from their habitats due to the deforestation by humans. These mass extinction not only affect the food chain system of nature, but also make immense impacts on the climate and ecosystem. In addition, over grazing also plays as a cause in the extinction of many known or unknown plants and animals, it causes an increase in the reproduction cycle of some species rapidly, which are harmful to the cultivation and life of individuals. For instance, the extinction of rats snakes from some regions has triggered an increase in the number of rats, the creatures which are destroying cultivation. Therefore, the vanishing of particular species or animals is one of the inevitable problems in this century.
On the other hand, there are clear arguments for more detriment issues such as pollution, which endangers the whole ecosystem. This is probably because of the over usage of fossil fuels and the plastics in the industries and various means of transportation. Because of the pollution, soil, air and water are also polluted, and the impact of pollution are perilous to the biodiversity. For example, the emission of carbon di oxide and the atmosphere causes ozone layer depletion, which is believed as the major reason behind global warming. Due to this, there are rapid changes that occur in the temperature and climate on the earth surface. So, despite the eradication of species or plants, pollution is also an enormous environmental problem in recent years.
Although the elimination of biodiversity and pollution are the leading environmental issues, over population is also a substantial problem of this generation. There is no sufficient infrastructure and resources left for the future generation. Even though most governments enforce strict rules to reduce the population ratio, it does not mitigate the population yet. However, the lack of resources due to overcrowding is also a crucial environmental hazard in contemporary.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments for both and against the topic which argue disappearance of distinct species is the major problem of the environment, I believe pollution and over population are the most significant threats of this era.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 316, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun known seems to be countable; consider using: 'many knowns'.
Suggestion: many knowns
...o plays as a cause in the extinction of many known or unknown plants and animals, it cause...
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Line 10, column 251, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he most significant threats of this era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 8.3376753507 360% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2170.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30562347188 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05373394019 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508557457213 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 696.6 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9771357581 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.555555556 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7222222222 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05555555556 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17431325916 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532036439378 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636005131959 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108316037208 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536621925777 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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