Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people insist on this view, sharing information as possible in scientific research should not be freely, other one has opposite views. this essay will discusses both view as follows.
Firstly, Not only does sharing information can help scientist to know all new information which are involved in all around the word, but also it cause to becom advanced Country by knowing new research. This issue help scientist to used other exploration in their own idea to reach new things faster.
Secondly, using other exploration can help scientist to bring new ideas according others scientist's invention. This point guide scientist to grow new idea which are following others scientist until reach bigger explore. In some cases the scientist who are from different countries are work together base on same ideas and at the end propagate article or release new invention.
Besided, in other side it is important to having trust between scientist when they are released new invention freely. They should not stolen their ideas as own self. By this fact not only is it good to share idea, but also it is more helpful to be advance in during the time.
Finally, in my idea sharing the information is more acceptable in comparison with not sharing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0193236715 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53461646276 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2487713157 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4545454545 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8181818182 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192112947187 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0858439136773 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916471685921 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135237503695 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101655927364 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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