Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
It is true that music has no limitation on language and culture, it is one of the crucial medium to unify the people from all around the world. Many people claim that, music is the good way of connecting people of various cultures and ages. I totally agree in this statement and the essay will examine the arguments on the favor of the topic.
To begin with, it is hard to find the people who does not love music, even taste of music can be different from each people, country or age. In this modern age, music is playing vital role in connecting the people from one part of the world to another. However, even people are facing cold war between two countries or society, when it comes on music they get unifies and enjoy the moment. For example, the political relation of Pakistan and India is not in good condition, but the craze and fans of Indian singer in Pakistan are huge and they are desperate to take photo with their favorite artis. Moreover, there is no any language barrier, cultural barrier and racism in music. people are enjoying the music and it’s felling despite of language barrier. Such as, the Russian song Despacito become the highest viewed song in YouTube and ranked number one in world and same happen in Nepal, even only few person can understand and speak Russian language in Nepal. Furthermore, world will watch the live concert of world famous singer like , Taylor Swift, Michael Jackson not because of they are related to particular country or religion, because they are celebrity.
Secondly, Music is the vehicle of expressing own feeling and sharing knowledge and experience. From the early ages, people use music to express their happiness and sorrow, sometime to aware people by singing. Music is universal language that everyone can understand it, no one have to go for school or college to understand music. For example, our grandparents used to sing different kind of music in different occasion, even they are not trained singer. In addition, nowadays, concerts are becoming the useful place to make connecting with people, make new friends and make the memorable events of their life.
In conclusion, the language of music is universal and it is becoming the main vehicle for unification of people from the world and expressing their cultural, ritual and religion as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86616161616 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41684999388 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3749126016 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.352941176 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2941176471 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245509622297 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092258451425 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732178019648 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163571376001 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641842005019 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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