Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds.
Do you agree and disagree about this option?
Animal conservation has become a frequent subject of debate with strong arguments for and against it. From my perspective, I agree with the view that the protection of wildlife should be encouraged as massive as possible.
The first reason related to this option is protecting wild animals and birds could maintain the balance state of the ecology system. This is perfectly exemplified in the case of a number of rainforests that used to be the habitat for wild creatures no longer exist, resulting in the reduction in the diversity in genes, ecosystems, and these species.
The second reason for this is the disappearance of certain undomesticated species can lead to potential economic issues. Since there are interdependent bonds between a number of creatures such as whales and small fishes, when a creature is at risk of declining, the remaining ones have to face considerably dead threats. Therefore, the national budget of a domestic economy which they contributed to would have an adverse impact such the fishing industry.
The final reason is wild species play a significant role in vital scientific research. This could be explained by the fact that there are various animals are studied and researched in order to provide remedies that help to alleviate fatal diseases such as HIV. Therefore, if wild creatures are excessively exploited or not well-preserved, in the near future, humankind might probably face risks to health.
In conclusion, since the conservation of wild animals and birds could give considerable merits for the environment and society, I would argue that this practice should be encouraged and operated enthusiastically on a large scale.
- Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis What are the reasons and how to encourage them to spend their time walking 89
- Some people think that there should be some strict controls on noise Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- When choosing a job salary is the most important decision To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 11
- The top priority of businesses is making money and they do not need to have social responsibilities To what extent do you agree or disagree 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29588014981 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04899739858 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602996254682 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3597192698 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.545454545 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136753879397 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523276316089 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519613274567 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783310384338 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452616351605 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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