Some people say that we do not need printed newspaper nay more. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?
As the prevalence of the Internet increases inexorably in recent years, the way of reading news has emerged as a topic of interest. It is argued that conventional newspapers have been on the wane in light of the proliferation of online information channels. While this thinking is valid to a certain extent, I believe that abolishing printed papers would have an adverse bearing on both readers and society.
There are many compelling reasons why some people advocate the utilization of digital publications instead of paper versions. First, online news readers will stand a better chance of getting up-to-the-minute news, which will be particularly helpful for people being up to their ears in work and not having time to purchase papers at a newsstand. Second, online news, prompted by advertisements, is virtually free of charge. Most e-papers do not charge readers, which discourages many people from buying printed materials.
However, despite the aforementioned benefits of internet-based newpapers, I would contend that dispensing with printed news, in fact, can do both users and society a disservice. Today, the increasing accessibility of the internet to everyone from all walks of life has given rise to a vast array of diseases detrimental to eyes like short-sightedness, astigmatism or even blind. Therefore, if everyone read online newspapers, it is no longer feasible for them to see thing clearly, let alone reading newspapers. In addition to this, the enormous cost incurred to cover fees related to e-papers like cyberattack, fake news about politics will put a strain on government coffers, leading to budget deficits, tax hikes, or reduced welfare among others.
In conclusion, while the benefits of online newspapers make it seem like a good idea, I believe that traditional papers should not be abolished.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... some people advocate the utilization of digital publications instead of paper ve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34602076125 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13388999613 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653979238754 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1913291527 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.75 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115810660565 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419362992168 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457286294958 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630154080267 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225211610252 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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