Some people think that the best way to get news is through the newspaper, while others disagree.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
Opinions are divided as to whether receiving news through newspaper or through other sources is the best way. Although newspaper can provide reliable information, other types of media are progressively surpassing it due to the participation of different news writers and use of vivid illustrations.
The proponents of using newspaper as a primary source of news usually predicate their thinking on the fact that information in newspaper is often accurate. This is because to publish a piece of news, it has to be vetted by a number of well-qualified editors who have developed great journalistic skills. Moreover, newspaper publishers have to be accountable for what they spread, so were there any misleading information that could discredit someone, they would accept full responsibility for that misinformation. Therefore, readers, especially older generations, tend to gravitate towards these mainstream sources for serious news.
Nevertheless, the quality of news published on social networking sites has increased significantly. In fact, these virtual platforms are transparent spheres where news writers with different levels of journalistic skills can post their angles of a certain affair, and viewers can greatly benefit from this by comparing and contrasting such views with the mainstream ones. Such competition has made online information increasingly trustworthy. Furthermore, online news sources tend to utilize multimedia content, such as videos or images, to enhance viewer’s understanding of current events. For example, a video clip is much more illustrative and catchy to viewers, especially young ones than a written news item, although conventional newspapers can provide a deeper coverage of that event. For these reasons, not only will multimedia platforms attract a greater readership, but also more certified respondents to post their accounts on affairs.
In conclusion, while some prefer traditional sources of news, other kinds of media have been gaining huge popularity recently because of their convenience and will likely to outperform newspaper.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 22, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions are divided as to whether receiving news through newspaper or thr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78896103896 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20852001576 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62987012987 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7748882496 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.153846154 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0769230769 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192596074663 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719230205811 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0896417970685 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132886417905 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800691901205 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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