Some people think that boys and girls should be educated in the same schools. Others, however, believe that girls achieve better results when educated in single-sex schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In this day and age, coming along with the rapidly growing world, it is argued whether boys and girls should be educated in the same schools or they ought to be educated in single-sex ones in order to achieve full potential in academic studying. In these following paragraphs, I will analyze both sides of this hot potato which makes parents being confused in choosing appropriate schools for their children forwarding to great perspectives in the foreseeable future.
To commence with, we cannot deny considerable advantages mixed-gender school brings which are the equality and totally-developed environment. In fact, co-educational institutions take such gender non-discrimination that every learner receive equal levels of opportunities, no one is given any priority in examinations in light of their sex. Consequently, both schoolgirls and boys feel that they are treated fairly leading to a united society. Moreover, working in a team with opposite-gender one, these students will be less nervous by having already contacted with various friends. One obvious example is when teachers give them sophisticated assignments, cooperation of knowledge between boys and girls will assist not only to find the best solution but also to gain their experience and confidence. Thus, combination of knowledgeable horizon enhance their soft skills, especially in socializing.
On the other hand, there are two major reasons supporting to the existence of single-gender institutions. Girls, who are in adolescence, have a tendency to produce hormones called oxytocin which make them excited and always think about ones they fall in love. Therefore, female-only institutions are constructed to prevent early love relationships, helps students not be distracted by the opposite-sex and boost their concentration on their scholastic studying. Besides, female students find it easier to share their secrets and sensitive problems with their fellows without worrying and work out together for the solutions. Accordingly, schoolgirls will be provided sense of security, comfort when collaborate with peers who have the same gender.
From my point of view, I suppose that mixed-gender schools have superior merits rather than the single-sex one owing to its advantages far outweigh disadvantages in social fairness and full-grown educational environment.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that both the separate and co-educated schools take their own beneficial and detrimental points that learners also have adoptabilities for different study conditions. Personally, I think it is a better option of co-education thanks to outstanding advantages compared with the single-sex faculties.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2278.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73803526448 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31031630086 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63476070529 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1999983448 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.375 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8125 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244565852308 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746898806881 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618308541603 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145344425507 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627234550672 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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In this day and age, coming along with t...
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Suggestion: to appropriate
...akes parents being confused in choosing appropriate schools for their children forwarding t...
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...erspectives in the foreseeable future. To commence with, we cannot deny conside...
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...oft skills, especially in socializing. On the other hand, there are two major r...
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...e with peers who have the same gender. From my point of view, I suppose that mi...
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...nd full-grown educational environment. In conclusion, it is undeniable that bot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, consequently, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, i suppose, i think, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2278.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73803526448 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31031630086 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 176.041082164 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63476070529 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1999983448 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.375 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8125 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9375 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244565852308 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746898806881 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618308541603 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145344425507 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627234550672 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.