Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education, and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.
As a result of life quality improvement, it is considered that all students can attend university without tuition fees despite their affordability of higher education. This essay is going to demonstrate that subsidizing college education will do more harm than good.
Firstly, there is a combination of reasons why many people prefer to pursue tertiary education without fees. Indeed, providing free university education will create more opportunities for the underprivileged who can not afford the enormous fee of university education. In addition, a surge in the number of people going to university, as an outcome of supplying free-of-charge education, indirectly, would provide a more educated workforce for the society. This not only contributes to a more developed lifestyle but also reduces the criminal and jobless rate.
Despite these advantages, I would suppose that a free-college policy is, in fact, can be detrimental for both individuals and society. These days, it is very competitive for graduated students can find a job for a complicated requirement of employers. Therefore, if the proportion of people graduating from upper education increased and many people could be entitled to university education, it would definitely lead to an acrimonious competition in job seeking. Besides, because the government pays a lot of money for education, other welfare as healthcare, security, or entertainment would be declined.
To conclude, university tuition waivers have some benefits to our life but I assume that government is not to make it free for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, in addition, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52892561983 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27049343581 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603305785124 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3142983956 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.636363636 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200071257768 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077271624834 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480155299384 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134475418005 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469295564132 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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