Problems of modern universities
The text under the headline “Designing a university for the new millennium” published in YouTube channel dedicated to the Ted talks is devoted to the problem of modern tertiary education.
The author of the article takes a critical view of the condition the situation in which higher educational institutions have found themselves today. According to the author, universities have moved away from their original task, which was to open new minds for further prospects. Modern students now in the center of fierce competition, which is why even an ordinary question that they ask at a seminar can show their incompetence. According to the speaker, as it turned out, they pay for a diploma and degree, not for knowledge. After assessing the situation and being horrified by it, the author decided to open his own university, which will meet all the necessary canons. In this educational institution, the educational program differs from the usual one, but at the same time it trains highly qualified specialists.
The author draws the following conclusion that the goal of modern universities and students should not be to get a piece of paper for the sake of a future workplace, but first of all, to develop themselves as a person, their mind and intellect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, as to, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08173076923 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94535020547 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620192307692 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.0120028162 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.125 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191015906681 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736143196404 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972343949676 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166587971819 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969749173313 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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