Some people think that the government should be responsible or crime prevention, while others believe that it is the responsibility of the individual to protect themselves. Discuss both sides and give our opinion.
Reducing cybercrime units made a huge impact towards the responsibility of the country’s government. However, some argue that this role should also be directed towards the public’s individual acting. While the government could take several ideas from various institutions and come back down to one single decision, I believe that the people should also be able to improve on their won behaviour and safety.
On the one hand, only the government has the authority to alter society on a nation’s scale through the implementation of new laws and stricter punishment. Additionally, keeping the public informed about the risks and how important those risks can be reduced may alert the crime takers to change their direction on a second thought. For example. The government could allocate more funds policing the streets ensuring everyone’s safety. As a result, if the funds don’t go to the rightful hands, problem may arise, so dreadful precaution should be taken on behalf of the whole country. Focusing on the important options is the best solution towards negativity.
On the other hand, people should learn self-defense and they should be aware of their own safety in their houses and streets. Furthermore, people should take reponsibility for protecting their own neighborhood of families by reporting suspicions behaviour and setting up neighborhood watching schemes. Changing passwords, for instance, allows online transactions to b safe and away from predators. As a result, these actions prevent malicious activity considering every individual on daily basis. A blanket ban on such criminal actions could be achieved by a nation’s support more efficiently than a single person finding solutions.
In conclusion, criminal activity rates are increasing day by day and actions revolving around the government to encourage safety in every city as well as individual responsibilities prevents risks of a country falling onto the hands of the wrongful and dreadful leaders of criminal units. Making choices as a nation is the best resolution towards any issue face by a country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... towards any issue face by a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43251533742 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0012057371 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598159509202 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4867554336 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.066666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.73333333333 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21673200172 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555136850365 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467408680285 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12312056158 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508326548242 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.