Some people think that the government waste money on arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere To what extent do you agree or disagree

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
... argued that government funds should be spend on public service rather than on arts l...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...an on arts like music, museum. Although i believe that services should be authori...
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Suggestion: ,
...ces should be authorities first priority , i also opine that arts are still import...
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...one hand, there are certain reasons why i think that government spending should b...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...ic transport have a direct influence on peoples livelihood and these facilities represe...
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...standard of living of society would have . To examplify , if government allocate m...
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...ing of society would have . To examplify , if government allocate money on health ...
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... health results in better mortality rate . similarly, with better education public...
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Suggestion: Similarly
...alth results in better mortality rate . similarly, with better education public can get b...
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...are rely on these facilities the most so government should invest in these servic...
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...vernment should invest in these services . One the other hand, i would argue th...
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...these services . One the other hand, i would argue that arts remain a pivotal ...
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...n of heritage of a country. To eleborate , as arts are the sign of identity and cu...
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...e of a society and with its conservation , it create a sense of togetherness in pe...
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Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
... society and with its conservation , it create a sense of togetherness in people , res...
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...create a sense of togetherness in people , resulting boost in patriotism. Secondly...
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...are shifted more toward digital platform , and museum and art centers suffer from...
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...form , and museum and art centers suffer from this. As a result , there revenue g...
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...t centers suffer from this. As a result , there revenue generation is deceased an...
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... will be lost. In conclusion, while i believe that government need to spend o...
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...nment need to spend on public facilities , but i also opine that it should not be ...
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Suggestion: .
...ld not be spent on the determint of arts .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, still, then, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14195583596 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80343361419 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545741324921 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3119414332 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.384615385 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3076923077 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211603854229 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751978671135 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348514433636 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124617951069 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220171271628 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.