Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In recent years, the number of people died and injured associated with dangerous sports are giving serious concern to the society. Some people, therefore, think that extreme sports should be prohibited due to the potential hazards to participants, and yet I would argue that people have the liberty to do legal things they want including any sports.
It sounds logical that a ban should be applied to all dangerous sporting activities is advisable despite consequences. It is clear that even when individuals are well-prepared with both knowledge and tools for sports they choose, the dangers are still lurking which can kill or injure them anytime. In addition, some of these sports not only render the player wounded, but also the cheering spectators. Take car racing for example, in 2004 in Japan, a Formula 1 race car crashed and debris from the crash flew into the crowd and caused serious injuries to both the racer and spectators.
However, I believe that people should be free to take part in any sports that they choose, so it would be wrong to stop climbing enthusiasts from challenging themselves and enjoying the invigorating experience of standing on the top of a mountain peak. Such as the first time humans set foot on Mount Everest in 1953, that record brought a sense of joy and pride to the participants and the rest of the world. Furthermore, when governments issue a ban on these kinds of sports, other disadvantages arise. Many athletes into the state of joblessness, manufacturers of sports equipment related to extreme sports will be closed and therefore it will terribly affect the society as well as the economy of the nation.
In conclusion, it would be wrong to prohibit other people's hobbies, the right of individuals to participate in sports of their choice should be retained.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99339933993 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76311940195 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8273409825 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.545454545 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32424024432 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113883423551 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743255140092 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196634485855 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662504047396 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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