Some people think international car-free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution; however, others think there are other ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion
There has been debate over what is the best solution for mitigating air contamination. While some people argue that international car-free days are effective in mitigating air pollution, others believe that there are more possible ways. This essay will discuss both points of views.
It is true that exhaust fumes from cars are one of the main cause of air pollution as they contain a relatively high proportion of pollutants such as CO2. When people around the world halt using cars, no harmful smoke will be released into the atmosphere, and this will improve the air quality. This policy is extremely effective in big cities in the world, such as Shanghai city, which is well known for its dirty air smog-filled atmosphere
However, there are more effective ways that should be applied to maximize gas emissions reduction. Firstly, local governments should try to further encourage the use of public transportation, such as subways and buses, as they only produce a smaller of quality pollutants, which in turn is less likely to impact the air quality. Secondly, toxic fumes from factories should be disposed of by updating advanced technology of production in order to reduce the massive amount of exhaust fumes emitted by factories. If such attempts are worldwide successful, emissions from major industrial areas would be substantially restricted, resulting in a gradual decrease in the level of pollutants in the air.
In conclusion, in my view, environmental pollution is the biggest problem that people have to face in the 21st century and to solve it many measures should be taken at the same time to be effective. I believe that only implementing one approach is pointless.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in my view, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13768115942 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8625206313 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615942028986 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.1690634608 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.909090909 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197662824599 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692031504748 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757064999345 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116132178879 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762850548013 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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