Some people think the government should take measures regarding the healthy lifestyle of individuals. Others think it must be managed by individuals.
Discuss both sides and give you opinion.
Some people argue that citizen should be able to ensure their health lifestyle, others feel it should financially be taken care by government. This citation reaches arguments on both sides, which we will elucidate in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, debaters of government responsibility for healthcare state that individuals should be conscious of their own health. there are numerous applications that offer guidance on leading to Healthy lifestyle. These apps provide much information on fitness routines and offer suggestion of health food recipes. Furthermore, when citizens choose unhealthy lifestyle, it can lead to the growing number of obesities. According to data from the World Health Organization (WHO), the pacific island nations of Nauru have the highest rate of obesity with almost a half of their population being classified as obese.
On the other hand, proponents of this view say that government more powerful than individual. Especially, they can execute the new rules and regulations on the food industry which is detrimental to healthy lifestyles. In previous example, making new policy to sugar taxes in order to reduces the consumptions of unhealthy beverages and foods. Moreover, authority can take steps to subsidize universal healthcare with ensuring the benefits of well-being extend to individuals from various background. Canada is a prime example of a country that has implemented universal healthcare system.
Overall, it seems to me that government’s involvement in managing citizen healthcare brings significant measures. Those include the implementations of policies and enacting the equity of healthcare subsidy. This is as long as individuals keep up with their health life choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64122137405 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07856074719 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652671755725 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7423703272 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5333333333 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167636501969 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482703057299 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523565843329 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100542995294 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308261286009 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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