Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about studying history. While some people think learning about the past events is pointless as they contain nothing special, I believe that they are far more crucial to acquire a proper vision about the present.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why most people prefer not to study history. One of them is that the beginning of the past history is mainly based on myth like Stone Age period, that can discourage readers because of including no essential information which can help to understand the present. Due to this reason they may stop reading the rest of it for the purpose of saving their time from wasting on unnecessary data. In my opinion, this often prevents some people from studying history.
However, I agree with those who are in favor of learning background events. As one of our ancestors said: “If people do not know their own history, they will have no proper future”, so people should set aside to study it. This is because people can obtain a lot of experiences from previous generations’ lives, in terms of discovering new things. It is clear that in the past ancient people also created new discoveries with numerous mistakes; in order not to repeat them, history should be learned. The less knowledge about the past events people have, the more attempts they might fail in regarding with inventions.
To conclude, despite some parts of history which include myth, knowing it is vital as for gaining experiences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o study history. One of them is that the beginning of the past history is mainly ...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to background'
Suggestion: to background
...with those who are in favor of learning background events. As one of our ancestors said: “...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...new things. It is clear that in the past ancient people also created new discover...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, regarding, so, while, as for, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 10.4138276553 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93227091633 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48152488333 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601593625498 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9256948093 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.166666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230210709194 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079707750641 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494585185891 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133185035793 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03708548988 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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