Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it
One of the burning issues of today's world is climate change. Some people argue that human can not quit climate change and we should adopt to live with it. I wholly disagree with this opinion because we still have a chance to solve this problem and save our nature.
There are several ways to prevent as long as alleviate climate change. Governments could introduce new laws to switch from using fossil fuels that lead to air pollution and global warming. Moreover, they could invest in renewable energy production from solar, wind and water power. As individuals, we should also try to limit our adverse influences on the climate such as using bicycles or public transport and using eco-friendly products
If we keep on progress rather than tackle the issue, i believe, it would be potential danger for every corner of the earth. As a tangible example, global warming will effect to melt ice. As a consequence, sea level will dramatically increase and a lot of cities will cover with water. After that people would lose their homes and their jobs and they would be forced to migrate another places or continents.
In conclusion, i believe that we must address problem of climate change because humans are unable to live in hazardous atmosphere.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...n not quit climate change and we should adopt to live with it. I wholly disagree with th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ransport and using eco-friendly products If we keep on progress rather than tackl...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... progress rather than tackle the issue, i believe, it would be potential danger f...
^
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...a tangible example, global warming will effect to melt ice. As a consequence, sea leve...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...places or continents. In conclusion, i believe that we must address problem of...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91509433962 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47606915823 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665094339623 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7569584414 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7272727273 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257017366388 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090039120558 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103933456829 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148851605619 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819151894331 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: ADOPT_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'adapt to'?
Suggestion: adapt to
...n not quit climate change and we should adopt to live with it. I wholly disagree with th...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 439, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ransport and using eco-friendly products If we keep on progress rather than tackl...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... progress rather than tackle the issue, i believe, it would be potential danger f...
^
Line 5, column 168, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...a tangible example, global warming will effect to melt ice. As a consequence, sea leve...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...places or continents. In conclusion, i believe that we must address problem of...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91509433962 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47606915823 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665094339623 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7569584414 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7272727273 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257017366388 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090039120558 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103933456829 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148851605619 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0819151894331 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.