Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups while others believe that it is better for them to study alone.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups while others believe that it is better for them to study alone.( dunnt know how to do it :) )
Some individuals believe that party exercise is more effective on the other hand, some believe it is better to exercise alone. This essay will analyse both people's views with the conclusion of my own opinion.
To begin with, as gang survey consists of different people with different ideas and experiences this will help to solve a problem in a more convenient way. People in a organization share their knowledge and help each other in a way so that there is not any curiosity left behind. For example, if a boy is facing difficulty in solving a mathematical problem, in that case a friend in a company can guide him to get it done.Therefore crowd exercise can be more effective as it is evaluated by a certain number of people in a gang.
While others prefer to review alone rather then getting involved in a team setting. By studying alone one can avoid unnecessary distractions that may arise while studying and can effectively concentrate on own study.
All people in a body may not have the same goal like others because they enjoy other activities like listening music or playing games. Individuals with these kind of character can distract those with a genuine aim of studying. For example, a club research can be disrupted if someone from the crowd suddenly starts playing music because he is less interested in the faction investigation.
To conclude, as both views have their own sound reasons. I believe that one can achieve better in studies by studying alone as unnecessary distractions can be easily avoided.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
some people think that it is more effective ...
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Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dunnt
...t it is better for them to study alone. dunnt know how to do it : Some individuals ...
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Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o study alone. dunnt know how to do it : Some individuals believe that party exer...
^^^
Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...lem in a more convenient way. People in a organization share their knowledge and ...
^
Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... a company can guide him to get it done.Therefore crowd exercise can be more effective as...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... a company can guide him to get it done.Therefore crowd exercise can be more effective as...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 530, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y a certain number of people in a gang. While others prefer to review alone rather th...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...le others prefer to review alone rather then getting involved in a team setting. By ...
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Line 6, column 152, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...usic or playing games. Individuals with these kind of character can distract those with a ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82191780822 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73194494139 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544520547945 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4031727134 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418091258846 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146661399919 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179217066813 0.0667982634062 268% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245297273849 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183678687982 0.056905535591 323% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
some people think that it is more effective ...
^^^^
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Dunnt
...t it is better for them to study alone. dunnt know how to do it : Some individuals ...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o study alone. dunnt know how to do it : Some individuals believe that party exer...
^^^
Line 4, column 167, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...lem in a more convenient way. People in a organization share their knowledge and ...
^
Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
... a company can guide him to get it done.Therefore crowd exercise can be more effective as...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 423, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... a company can guide him to get it done.Therefore crowd exercise can be more effective as...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 530, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y a certain number of people in a gang. While others prefer to review alone rather th...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...le others prefer to review alone rather then getting involved in a team setting. By ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 152, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...usic or playing games. Individuals with these kind of character can distract those with a ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82191780822 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73194494139 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544520547945 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4031727134 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418091258846 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146661399919 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179217066813 0.0667982634062 268% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245297273849 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183678687982 0.056905535591 323% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.