It good opportunity to travel abroad for job business learner different culture study and so on.Another else,many people believe some of information can be seen on TV, history books, internet and so on. but I differ from them.This essay intends to analyse both prospective and I give my opinion both side in the upcoming paragraph.
First and foremost to support on this concep,it is good to travel abroad for tourist people for different reasons like a job business,study,and so on.Another side when people go to visit different country to learn their culture. it is good informative source for children and they gain our knowledge.people can we learn history about past period. this type of foreign tourist can be increase our experience. generally people go to outside country with their friends and relatives and spending a good quality time with them as well as make me feel very jubilant.
On the other hand internet is great source of informative news. very few people believe go to abroad it is waste of money and time .some of information available on TV and internet, but people see some learn some learn about culture at that time they do only prospective, but they go to abroad at day time they can seen in front of eyes and it can make me very interesting.
In conclusion, I believe all people should be go to visit another Nation because it is great experience for all people.It is best way to learn outside information
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84210526316 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82446629664 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522267206478 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.1945624512 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.888888889 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4444444444 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306981203891 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122423360401 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609477470715 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187571016714 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379947048517 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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