Some people think money is the best gift to give to youngsters, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The tradition of giving and receiving gifts among people has been in existence from ages. People gift presents to others in order to congratulate one's victory, to wish birthday and to celebrate festivals. Today, the most common gift given to the youngsters is money. In further discussion, the positive and negative effects of gifting money to children are highlighted.
Some people believe that money is the best gift for youngsters. To support this, adults usually find it difficult to decide what present they should buy for the toddlers to fascinate them. The minds of the young children are creative and their liking towards a particular entity may vary with time. Therefore, to impress children is not an easy task as one would have to think according to a child and then deciding their likes and dislikes. Thus, they prefer gifting money rather than their toys being dumped by children. This allows the children to possess anything of their choice. Children can also save the money in their piggy banks for future use. On a similar note, gifting money saves time for parents who have a hectic schedule at work.
On the contrary, other people believe that children should not be gifted money as it exploits their habits. When children are provided with ample amount of money without being questioned, they are most likely to fall for undesirable activities such as smoking, drinking and drugs. This causes severe effect on their health and acts as hurdle in their future. Also, refusing to give money to children results in their reluctant behaviour towards academics. Such activities lead to the wastage and misuse of the hard earned money of the parents at an early age.
I believe that money cannot buy happiness. Though money can be given as a gift to children but there should be certain limits and proper guidance, so as, to keep children under control and away from the wrong pursuits.
In conclusion, it is not necessary to gift children money to applaud their achievements. The parents must organize picnics and trips occasionally to rejuvenate themselves and strengthen their relationship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ents to others in order to congratulate ones victory, to wish birthday and to celebr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1776.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07428571429 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53883469975 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6323324622 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5714285714 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192871287665 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729780575863 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775454680042 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116332421496 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605132075423 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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