Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
People want to become rich because they want to live luxury life as compared to poor life. The most of people do not think about others when they want to achieve a high living standard. They just want to show superiority on others. This is why according to my point of view; I totally disagree with this statement.
In the modern era, there is competition of wealth and power, therefore everyone needs to show one`s important in this world with these. As we know that in competition we have to win, so players of any competition do not help others. Same thing is happening in the race of being rich, as no one shares one`s secret to being rich and help others. This is the main reason but there are also many other reasons.
On the other side, poor people give satisfaction to elite class. When they see them in tore clothes and shoes with no food, they think that we are superior than them, so that God has given us success and power. Whereas in reality they are testing through their resources. They think that if we help them, they will become like us and we will lose our dominance that`s why they do not help them. Moreover they have fear that they will not obey them.
To sum up the arguments, rich people do not help the poor people because they love their dominancy. Only few people help the poor people because of their regions and for society appreciation, otherwise they cannot see then beside them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...xury life as compared to poor life. The most of people do not think about others when they wan...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...o food, they think that we are superior than them, so that God has given us success ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat God has given us success and power. Whereas in reality they are testing through the...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... that's why they do not help them. Moreover they have fear that they will not obey ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, whereas, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54651162791 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27595961914 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538759689922 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9601140312 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250855861679 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904914895238 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869867225925 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157473223072 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468493490791 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.