Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have variety views about the main function of museums that is entertainment or education. Personally, I believe that museums can and should be both entertaining and educational places.
On the one hand, someone think that museums should be enjoyable places for everyone. In many cities, museums are tourist attractions through the main activity is organizing exhibition. They can show collection of interesting objects or some kind of contemporary arts such as light performances. The average visitors may become bored if they have to read great deal of educational content, so museums put more of an emphasis on enjoyment. This type of museums is designed to be visually spectacular and many attractive activities as a part of its exhibition.
On the other hand, I would argue that the educational role of museums does not conflict with entertaining one. The aim of any exhibition should be to introduce visitors something that they did not previously know. Usually this means the history behind objects in collection or innovative technology of edge. This can be done in various way. For instance, the museums could employ professional guides to talk with their visitors, offer headsets for visitors to listen to detailed commentary about exhibition or provide information selectively. This way, museums can play an important role in teaching people about history, science and many aspects of life.
In conclusion. it seems to me that a good museums should be able to offer an interesting, enjoyable and educational experience so that people can both have fun and learn something at the same time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: thinks
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Suggestion: museum
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27131782946 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97915559628 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577519379845 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.628158947 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1428571429 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295514301921 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102400301747 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895075588641 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206170995517 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756975547096 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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