Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There have been debates regarding whether the top priority of museums should be designed places for entertainment or education. In my opinion, both functions play equally vital roles, which will be discussed in this essay.
On the one hand, it is apparent that museums could become valuable educational tools in numerous ways. The most practical one, which should be taken into account is that exhibitions at museums, especially historical ones, could be used as realistic evidence to illustrate specific lessons, incentivizing students to be more engaged in history. More particularly, exhibitions of war remnants, such as guns, tanks, or planes might visually appeal and arouse one’s imagination. As a result, chances are they would be more inclined to look more into history and tend to memorize events’ meaning instead of cramming long and complicated lessons, which are taught at schools or universities.
On the other hand, integrating teaching with entertainment to form a place where numerous educational tools could also be seen as recreational, seems to be feasible. Particularly, tourists from around the world could visit random museums like archaeological, science, or art museums to find out how developed a country or an area is only by virtual reality. The tendency to use those cutting-edge gadgets has become ubiquitous among tourists when traveling to Vietnam, especially to Ho Chi Minh City, due to the fact that they can witness past events or continuing experiments with their own eyes.
In conclusion, I believe that museums can possibly become destinations for both recreation and education so as to attract both local and foreign visitors to simultaneously broaden their horizons and engage in leisure activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, as to, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44117647059 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04205670502 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672794117647 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.71964259 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.0 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224196336115 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860454011769 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564676901796 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13995252454 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489401371423 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.