Some people think that the only way to judge someone’s success in business is by the amount of money they make, is this a true indicator of success of a business and in what other ways could success in a business be measured?
The idea of evaluating the prosperity of an enterprise only by the volume of income has gained widespread acceptance. Although the profitability can partly contribute to the advancement of any firm, I firmly hold the view that there are various factors to be taken into consideration.
On one hand, there are some justifications for the opinion that the corporate profit defines how smoothly and effectively an organization run, chief of which might be that highly profitable firms are likely to guarantee their employees stable salaries and other benefits. A quintessence of such a prosperous business is Vin group, a multinational corporation with headquarters based in Vietnam, which leads the Vietnamese market when it comes to real estate trade. The abundance of financial resources offers staff higher rates of salary than other companies in the same industry, not to mention other benefit packages such as generous travel allowance, insurances and medical coverage. Alternatively, a business which is struggling with financial hardship, it can not ensure such perks for workers. Consequently, the employees will quit their jobs and it may be impossible to regard as a successful firm.
On the other hand, I hold the view that how much progress a company has made is not only attributable significantly to the profit maximization but also the environmental sustainability of the business. People this day are deeply concerned with environmental issues, so more and more individuals support goods and services from environmentally-friendly companies. In fact, an enterprise with such a wide customer base is prone to be successful. If a firm generate its profit at a cost of detrimental effect on the environment, it can probably be publicly condemned and even boycotted. In other words, a so-called prosperous company owner needs to show that his organization’s running is environmentally sustainable.
In conclusion, a healthy financial status is of great importance when assessing the progress of any business, yet it is not the only requisite. This is because the ability to run a company environmentally sustainably also plays an utmost important role in corporate evaluation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1853.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43401759531 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.47784019426 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598240469208 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4785049186 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.357142857 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117412679589 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038298706161 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0233409888427 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0594445580834 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037699761262 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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