Some people think that zoos are cruel and all of the zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the role and function of zoos is a highly controversial topic. While some individuals protest against the existence of the zoos because of the cruelty to the animals that has happened in that places, I wholeheartedly hold the view that zoos play an utmost significant role in preserving animals on the verge of extinction.
On one hand, there are some justifications behind the demand for shutting down the zoos, chief of which is that wild animals are kept in the artificial surroundings. As a matter of fact, a large proportion of species in zoos are caught from natural habitats where they are free to go hunting and mating the way they want; however, when they are held in captivity, those wild species are prone to lose their natural instincts. By way of illustration, a couple of tigers need an extremely spacious area to reproduce, yet the successful reproduction is rare when it comes to tigers being kept in a wildlife enclosure. Therefore, this may affect detrimentally to the mating behaviors between tigers. Hence, a huge number of animal lovers suggest the closure of zoos with the hope that they will be released to their natural habitats and live their lives freely.
On the other hand, despite the fact that zoos can influence deleteriously on animals’ initial wildness, I firmly believe that they still play an indispensable role in saving the rare species which are on the brink of extinction. One of the most compelling reasons for this opinion is that zoos provide safe environment that have no threats from the predators. Take the example of the wild elephants, which are usually hunted by illegal hunter to take tusks for ivory trade, so this species is facing a risk of being slayed. Nevertheless, zoo elephants are carefully safeguarded and supervised by the zookeepers and the CCTV cameras, and no hunters can cause any damage to them. In fact, there are some species which are only found in the zoos, they would be killed by the hunters soon after returning to their natural habitats.
To sum up, keeping animals in cages might put them at risk of being unable to reproduce, and this is considered cruel to some people. Nonetheless, I am against the idea of closing down the zoos because these places have done an excellent job of preventing endangered animals from being extinct.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, still, therefore, while, in fact, as a matter of fact, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89847715736 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75669571768 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532994923858 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1092998156 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.857142857 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234900760043 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811119596786 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519089366571 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157777011816 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042449480522 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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