A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent times, a pivotal marker of one's wealth is the social status and the types of belongings, and the kindness, hospitality or the trust are not attached as great significance as in the past. From my perspective, it is understandable that people tend to assess the facilities and the possession to judge a household, I firmly believe that the aforementioned old-fashioned values are still regarded as of great importance to everybody's criteria.
On the one hand, there are various justifications behind the judgement according to position in the community and the material ownership. One of the most compelling reason is the fast-paced development of urban regions, especially in the big metropolis. As a matter of fact, a majority of city dwellers might afford to purchase a motorbike, an automobile or even a house. If a household do not have that kind of amenities, they can be considered the people living in poverty simply because they are expected not to have enough money for the possessions that are becoming more common nowadays. Another rationale is the social status of a citizen. In fact, a person who is a politician or the office manager might be supposed to be more valuable for the community. This is due to the fact that those kind of person can contribute considerably to the improvement of the nation such as suggesting some feasible solution for the top agenda of the government. As a result, they would be admired more than those who are homeless or have to live in lower living standard.
On the other hand, I believe that the old values people used to judge an individual's worth like honor, kindness and trust are still remained valuable in the modern day. That is because people are able to express their kindness through the social activities such as taking part in a volunteer club or giving away free clothing and food to the families in remote area. By participating in those community work, they might be considered as the heroes and would be invited to help a hand in similar activities because of their high social value. By way of illustration, some Vietnamese singers like Den Vau often travel to the mountainous areas in the North of Vietnam to support the people living there by doing some charity works to increase their living standard and to gain some inspiration for the creations of brand-new attractive music videos for everyone. Consequently, he has gained widespread popularity among the citizens in all three large regions in Vietnam as well as his international fans around the globe.
In conclusion, despite the criteria to assess one's worth has change for the passage of time, it is undeniable that the old-fashioned value are still playing an indispensable role in people status judgement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, so, still, well, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2284.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 462.0 315.596192385 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94372294372 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93574166304 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519480519481 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 747.9 506.74238477 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0387983443 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.75 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.875 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191782197158 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599165469838 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417040732085 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116212261365 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0154568955325 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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