Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Human resources are the lifeblood of each country, so the training of future generations is always a top priority. It would be argued by some that parents have the responsibility for instructing children to be good social citizens, but others suggest that it is best left to school. In this essay, I will consider both ideas and explain why I agree with the combination of the above ones.
There are a variety of reasons why many individuals turn to parents when it comes to children's education issues. Some believe parents are always the first teachers to lay the foundation for the youth’s perception, personality, and lifestyle. In Vietnam, when a child has bad behavior and attitude, parents are always the first to be complained about and criticized because others think that parenting is a basic right and obligation. Others feel that it is the intimate relationship in the family that will easily create trust and since then, counseling for youngsters becomes simpler.
On the other hand, several (a number of) people argue the better place for children to be fully equipped on the road to becoming good citizens in the future is school. This group often states that school is a miniature society. Besides professional knowledge, lessons on experience and skills in life are displayed in the most obvious way, through which teenagers are constantly honed to become outstanding individuals to make great contributions to the country in the future. They further note that if it is difficult for relatives to teach children, school is an ideal environment for strangers to exchange real thoughts or ideas, learn from each other, and progress together.
It’s my opinion that cooperation between school and family is a perfect solution in the development of children. If the child's living environment is always positive and oriented towards an ideal citizen, it will more or less affect the child's perception. It shows that it would be great if teens were taught at home and received extra lessons at school.
In conclusion, while some state teaching children how to be good members of society is the duty of parents or schools, I personally think that children will increase their awareness in shaping their future thanks to a great deal of support from both the family and the school.
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, then, while, in conclusion, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04461942257 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75461787192 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55905511811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4338747759 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.133333333 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306137410276 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900204336035 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766080467549 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163825003224 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618038141643 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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