Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence,while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways
What is your opinion?
ople have discussion around the relationship between the level of smart brains and achievement the goal. It is disagree with this link, because there are a lot of another ways to judge the final results. This essay will deal with both opinion to reach the most acceptable one.
A group of people claims that many of good results it privilege only for the smarter people. It is out of the ordinary for people to be smart in what they do, therefore do not expect all people could complete their target. For instance, the yearly promotion only going to whom in the high level of smart rather than others and this how managers comparison between employees.
On the other hand, another group of people holds totally another vision, which they assumes that there are a plenty of ways to know the intelligence. The way to think, to be creative, and think out side the box during the process to achieve the target its vital to know the level of the smart, however the final result. Such as, If we have a team work together and one mate have a different idea could solve a future issue, but as a team another team mate done it, of course that not means the first person less than in intelligence of the second one!
In conclusion, the achievements should not be the only way to know the level of intelligence. There are different ways to get it, for example the way of the person think and solve the problem. There is no bond between success and intelligence. Finally, I totally agree with the second opinion for the reasons mentioned above
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Ople
ople have discussion around the relationship...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
... brains and achievement the goal. It is disagree with this link, because there are a lot...
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Message: Did you mean 'privileges'?
Suggestion: privileges
...ple claims that many of good results it privilege only for the smarter people. It is out ...
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'assume'
Suggestion: assume
...olds totally another vision, which they assumes that there are a plenty of ways to know...
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Message: Did you mean 'outside'?
Suggestion: outside
...way to think, to be creative, and think out side the box during the process to achieve t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5615942029 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39909523571 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536231884058 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9353561921 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.916666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216124050898 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727363261883 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453270082418 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121680280037 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531177413314 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.