Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence,while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways
What is your opinion?
The concept of intelligence has been a subject of debate with some arguing that success is the ultimate measure of intelligence, while others think that it can not be accurately measured by success alone. This essay aims to explain that there are various ways to gauge intelligence.
Success is often associated with accomplishments and achievements, which is an important aspect of intelligence. However it should not be the sole measure of intelligence. Can be influenced by several factors such as luck, opportunities and social . Therefore, relying only on success as a measure of intelligence can be misleading and fair.
Oh the other hand intelligence is a multifaceted construct that encompasses a wide range of abilities.It includes cognitive skills like problem solving abilities, critical thinking, and creativity as well as social and emotional intelligence.By considering these aspects, we can have an exact comprehensive understanding of an individual’s intelligence . Assessing intelligence solely based on success fails to capture these diverse aspects, limiting our ability to recognize and nurture different talents.
In conclusion, while success provides a valuable insight into an individual’s intelligence, it should not be the sole measure as intelligence is a complex blend of cognitive, social and emotional abilities that cannot be denied. By embracing a
more inclusive approach to measuring intelligence, we can better appreciate the diverse talents and strengths that individuals possess and By considering these factors, we can have a more accurate understanding of intelligence. is crucial to move beyond the narrow focus on success and adopt a broader perspective that acknowledges the multifaceted nature of intelligence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77307692308 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54575222441 2.80592935109 126% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561538461538 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.4073771874 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.454545455 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328923311303 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133535898212 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124832992001 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20092072888 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110544960808 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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