Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, what teachers should educate their students has been a prominent issue in many parts of the world. While some people maintain that educators should play essential roles to direct their pupils to well judge and behave, I believe that they should teach their youngsters about academic curriculums at schools nowadays.
On the one hand, raising pupil’s awareness about their judgment and behaviour in the community, without any doubt, is a crucial responsibility of each teacher. According to experts, personality and characteristics of each person are built up soon when they are young. Therefore, educators should take up teaching them about judgment and behavior; which has resulted in establishing ethical fundamentals of good citizens’ quality in later life. In terms of spending too much time on their schools, students mainly contact and interact with both their classmates and teachers. By observing and imitating those actions from relatives at schools, pupils might be affected and react towards other people in society, thus not only should their parents be responsible for this, but their teachers also would be well-typical examples for students.
On the other hand, academic subjects at schools are carefully considered to teach students. When it comes to academic acknowledgment regarded as a human being’s civilization of treasures, students should be enhanced to study and inherit them. To complete this great mission, hardly do other sources from community boost, educators are pioneers to transfer wonderful knowledge to pupils. Furthermore, broadening students’ horizons when they are sitting at schools is an extremely crucial requirement for their living and society in future. For example, to seek decent jobs with fulfillment of satisfaction and healthy account banks when students are growing up after schooling, they need academic knowledge and other skills that are taught by teachers at schools.
In conclusion, teachers should manage to teach students both judgment, behaviour and academic knowledge. I strongly support that all those will help foster students’ development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: considered teaching
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...equirement for their living and society in future. For example, to seek decent jobs with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.62422360248 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86947950989 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611801242236 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.380281381 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.357142857 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352193053979 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120613285624 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798127334952 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232615867672 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229491803716 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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