Some people think that there should be strict laws to control the amount of noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
People hold different views about whether people should follow strict laws about controlling the quantity of noise or not. It is a taught question because implementing such kinds of laws has its advantages and disadvantages.
Positive side of strict laws about noise is in limitations of noise that can bring many troubles to humans. First of all, it can cause illnesses such as deafness and headache. What is more, household noise can disturb people who need to concentrate on their studying or work. Those ones can become stressful and depressed due to the lack of concentration. Furthermore, sometimes people make noise in public places what causes many problems, for example, awaking of a baby or elderlies` heart attack. So, I strongly believe that this type of noise needs to be regulated.
On the other hand, nowadays the noise is inevitable, especially in urban areas where it is produced by cars and their drivers, crowd and music in public places and construction workers. In addition, there are a lot of activities with making noise thanks to which one can feel free, relaxed, happy and calm. Moreover, in mostly they need less money and bring more happiness. For instance, going to noisy birthday party will make dozens of depressed people a great deal happier than visiting a professional psychologist. However, in spite of the level of noise and the amount of problems it causes, modern people got used to living in it and found many ways how to deal with unavoidable sounds. As a result, scientists have developed numerous inventions that block noise, for example, acoustic walls.
To sum up, strict laws to control noise has more minuses rather than pluses. But to manage this there is no need in laws because people can find ways to control their emotions and behave loudly only in special places and with people who do not need to focus on their work. Even if there were strict laws, people who wanted to make noise would do it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 276, Rule ID: THESE_ONES[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'Those' instead.
Suggestion: Those
... concentrate on their studying or work. Those ones can become stressful and depressed due ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all, in spite of, to sum up, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89457831325 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61910883566 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581325301205 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8813795906 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5882352941 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7647058824 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349042707622 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101649458248 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746869540818 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22644710643 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698446692065 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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