Some people think that we should invent a new language for international communication. Do the benefits of this outweigh the problems?
As the transnational business is growing with a calamity rate, the demand of a joint international language for communication is also raised. The majority of people claim that a new language should be created for such purpose. Regarding such idea, there are both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, to some particular people, it is difficult to acquire a new language. inventing a new language means that there is more things to learn including the pronunciation, grammatical structures or the alphabets of such language, and with many citizens, this is not an easy task to accomplish. For example, like the case of Hari Won, a famous Korean singer in vietnam. she has spent over nine years living in vietnam, but she still has troubles when using vietnamese, and she usually makes mistakes that lead to misunderstanding of the audience and players in the instruction when she hosts a vietnamese gameshow.
On the other hand, having an invented language for international communication can be a huge benefit because the global citizens will need to learn one language only. For instance, if Esperanto, an international language is widely used worldwide, businessman or businesswomen do not need to concern about acquiring other languages such as English or Chinese to negotiate. Besides, there will be no such misunderstanding between different languages when construing an contracts drafted in an joint international language. Furthermore, by learning one international language, human beings may concentrate and study faster, more precisely and efficiently.
In conclusion, I deem that it is the benefit that outweigh the problems of creating a new globally language as for those reasons above. However, I do believe that if a specific language is invented for the general communication purpose, it will nurture the commercial trading section around the world and improve the cordiality between countries.
- It is said that the amount of violence on the TV programs has negative effect on our social development and therefore should be reduced.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 61
- Nowadays, the traditions and customs relating to the food we eat and the way we eat are changing. Why is it happening? Do you think this kind of change is positive or negative? 73
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport 73
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods Summarise the in 73
- The chart below shows the changes in car ownership in Great Britain between 1961 and 2001 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Inventing
...is difficult to acquire a new language. inventing a new language means that there is more...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are more things'?
Suggestion: there are more things
...ge. inventing a new language means that there is more things to learn including the pronunciation, g...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to include'.
Suggestion: to include
...eans that there is more things to learn including the pronunciation, grammatical structur...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 380, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...Won, a famous Korean singer in vietnam. she has spent over nine years living in vie...
^^^
Line 5, column 625, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n when she hosts a vietnamese gameshow. On the other hand, having an invented la...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 465, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...een different languages when construing an contracts drafted in an joint internati...
^^
Line 9, column 465, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an contract' or simply 'contracts'?
Suggestion: an contract; contracts
...een different languages when construing an contracts drafted in an joint international langu...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 489, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...when construing an contracts drafted in an joint international language. Furthermo...
^^
Line 9, column 654, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...faster, more precisely and efficiently. In conclusion, I deem that it is the ben...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, still, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1634.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42857142857 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25855197096 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7892397508 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.692307692 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314308545609 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109309248584 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806958486037 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187651634125 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550993665218 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.