Some people think young people should be required to have full-time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people opine that youth should not be needed to have part-time study until their teenage. This apprehension seems to be more rational. I will discuss my viewpoints in following paragraphs.
To commence with, there are deluges of arguments in favour of doing full campus education till 18 years old. The most preponderant one is that it helps to free from drugs . To elaborate it, children do not become addicted of drinks and they can only concentrate on their education like in Canada, majority of learners have not habitual of drugs who go to schools regular. It cannot only contribute to save life ,but also leads to other benefits such as they can live longer Thanks to the wide range of advantages full day study offers, students can enhance their quality and productivity of their lives with ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand in one good stead as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Likewise, another pivotal aspect of aforementioned propositions is that it is only likely to help in one excel and thrive to help set goals. To make it more justify, when teenagers attend full-time classes at institutes they can work on specific field and easily make ambitions like if pupil more into science field they should choose medical stream by which they will become expert in it .For instance, the study results published by the government of Australia in March 2016 and April 2017 clearly indicate that approximately 85% students perform well to accomplish their motivate by taking full-time classes at least teenage age. Attending full campus classes are critical for the development of the learners.
Alternatively, a section of society contradicts above said view providing some justifications. They claim that it should not be required at least 18 years age because anybody not same like others so some students need to do work to fulfil their basis needs likely food, cloths while going for part-time classes because few belongs to poor family they want to do work due to poverty and they do not have enough time to do full time education at least age of 18. For instance, in India, most of the learners do not have rich so they do not go school full day. Hence, it is clear why some are said full-day campus not required at least 18 years.
To conclude, having pondered over above-said it is clear the benefits of taking full day classes until young age are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, likewise, so, well, while, at least, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 41.998997996 171% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 438.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8698630137 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61506988459 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559360730594 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.528938977 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 133.3125 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334497356454 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923407008903 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903488192539 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165276270869 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910424956895 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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