“Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.”
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is consider by some that menagerie safeguard terrestrial animals, while there are others who think that zoos use programs to protect the endangered animals, I believe that the environment in zoos, which the animals put in, are not convenient to the animals and that is not satisfactory.
On the one hand, there are many projects, which are exist in many zoological gardens, shield many spices of endangered animals from danger and help them to increase substantially. These programs are very significant because they have aided many animate being to survive from the danger of extinction. For example, the white rhino which was about to become extinct because of the danger of killing by hunters. Thus, there were two left in the world last year but now they are reproduce regularly and their number is growing.
On the other hand, a large number of animals live in small cages with unnatural environment. This can lead to danger effects on the physical and psychological condition of animals due to animals do not perform their usual activities such as running for animals like lions and flying for birds like eagles. In addition, they are treated inappropriately and sometimes even cruel. I went to a zoo before and I saw several animals was upset from being in small crates, so I was annoyed from watching animals like lions were stretching in a small cage and they were not able to run free.
In conclusion, although zoos save many animals which are in danger of extinction and help them to raise their number, the life they live in the zoo does not match their nature. In addition, sometimes when people treat the animals, it might reach the point of cruelty and this is unacceptable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'considered'.
Suggestion: considered
It is consider by some that menagerie safeguard terres...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'existed'.
Suggestion: existed
...and, there are many projects, which are exist in many zoological gardens, shield many...
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Line 3, column 476, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'reproduced'.
Suggestion: reproduced
...in the world last year but now they are reproduce regularly and their number is growing. ...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...umber is growing. On the other hand, a large number of animals live in small cages with unnatu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87586206897 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61519387449 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537931034483 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0824564991 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.545454545 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182979772493 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064043790989 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0578164748417 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120640319454 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606574369818 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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