Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
In this day and age, working environment is one of the most decisive factors among employees. It is believed that people have a tendency to do a long-lasting job whereas experiencing new workplace is preferred by some other people. In my opinion, despite the advantages of experience, I would rather contribute to the same cooperation in a long period.
When it comes to the first point of view, there are several benefits of working in the same company for whole life. Firstly, in-progress people easily get a promotion much easier than newbies. Take senior office worker as an example, when people contribute and create various beneficial values, the chairman absolutely consider to promote them into a higher position. Furthermore, it can be known that the more you spend on one business the more you can earn. To explain this, some cooperation offer an increase on the employees’ salary if people work in a particular period of time and pass the evaluated exam by a supervisor, that may not be experienced by a new coming colleague.
Turning to the other side, people tend to work in different workplace, that is trusted by many employee, especially the youngsters. Experiencing totally new working environment is a challenge and worth to try due to a strong networking. After settling down at the new company, the newbies first have to get to known their colleagues and build strong networking system in order to be adopted in a welcoming way. Additionally, people can learn and gain more experience from different supervisors or chairmen. Each leader has their own strengths and it is a must for people to ask and convert the useful knowledge into themselves.
In conclusion, both points of view share some advantages on income and experience. Changing a job consider as taking a new risk in people’s life, so it would be better to stay and get promotion in the same organization throughout the years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 319, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider promoting'.
Suggestion: consider promoting
...eficial values, the chairman absolutely consider to promote them into a higher position. Furthermor...
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Line 2, column 568, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...’ salary if people work in a particular period of time and pass the evaluated exam by a superv...
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Line 2, column 683, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... experienced by a new coming colleague. Turning to the other side, people tend t...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun employee seems to be countable; consider using: 'many employees'.
Suggestion: many employees
...different workplace, that is trusted by many employee, especially the youngsters. Experiencin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, whereas, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97196261682 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95769743338 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588785046729 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7818495743 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239592673476 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742354160168 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510374739313 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136284090272 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272229238545 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.