Some school are very strict about their school uniforms and the appearance of their pupils, While other schools have a very relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of children of having a school uniform?
Nowadays, it is a recent issue that many schools have adopted to control children outfit and perfomance, however, others have permitted freedom of chosen style. There are several advantages and disadvantages from this tropical issue, which I will elucidated in the forthcoming paragraph.
Regarding the benefits, curbing of the rules indirectly teach students to discipline and prevent social gap at school. Seemingly, this way could build children to involve in well-supported friendship and thus, they could more focus on academic achievement. Beside the major school priority of academic activities, school effortlessly supervise bullying action among students. Furthermore, wearing standardised dress code will enhance school pride, unity, and community spirit. Apparently, academic members will sense strong-bonding motivation and respect the great name of school. Thereby, this regulation not only will show identity not but also avoid juvenile-crime action.
Conversely, imposing this policy will erode diversity in school environment. In spite of teaching atmosphere, to recommend casual dress at school will be young learners' chance to embrace dissimilarity aspects. During educational phase, accepting the different cultures of fashion style would reduce race conflicts for their future. In addition, freedom regular outfit may express students' creativity interpreting personal character. In term of creative potential, they also could reflect self-identity which significantly boosts confidence. Regarding the future career, they possibly discover and develop a talent for fashion.
In conclusion, the positives of this policy at schools for many nations are lower social barrier and great school perfomance among learners. Meanwhile, the free-uniformed clothings may lead schoolers to increase cultural unity and individuals' creativity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to style'
Suggestion: to style
...others have permitted freedom of chosen style. There are several advantages and disad...
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Line 1, column 248, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'elucidate'
Suggestion: elucidate
... from this tropical issue, which I will elucidated in the forthcoming paragraph. Regardi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.15057915058 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.040775256 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698841698842 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.0887262536 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.5625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6875 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27352467591 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788119482353 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683014057872 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161881754633 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374976026884 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.09 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.32 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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