Some scientist thinks that there are intelligent life forms on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Whether humans should contact aliens from different planets or not, is a controversial issue. This essay will elaborate on the merits and drawbacks of the viewpoint.
Interaction with other extrarresstial races could hold the key to the survival and development of our civillisation. If humankind could interact with intelligent alien races and they were keen on sharing their experience about their life, at which they come from, people can absorb a great deal of valuable knowlege to maintain our appearance on the planet earth. More importantly, by adopting new technologies from the ailiens, human could apply the technological advances to our world, which can lead to the improvement of many aspects of our lives. For instance, people may be able to exploit the energy from the stars, thereby reducing our dependence on fossil fuels, which mitigate the negative impacts from usage of the natural resource on our planet.
On the other hand, communicating to other races beyond our world implies several threats. The first possibility is that we would stand a higher risk of being invaded by living creatures from outer space. If our messeges are sent to aggressive aliens, which are craving for accommodation and resources, the earth is likely to be their target for an invasion. Another downside of contacting other life forms from the universe is that it would spread out dangerous diseases, which poses a great threat to the health of the earth's civillian. This is because, the environment in other planets may be distinguished from ours, which can contain bacteria, virus that are harmful to human beings.
In sum, there are both benefits and disadvantages when people attempt reaching to intelligent creatures from the space. I am of the idea that we should delay our connection to other worlds, until we are able to prepare all relevant conditions for the events to happen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15909090909 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80622237974 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597402597403 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5519303512 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.230769231 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168165916525 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651355088529 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401138554192 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104528406794 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587421384589 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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