Some think dangerous extreme sports such as skydiving and rock climbing should be banned. To what extent do you agree?
The intensive sports, including skydiving and rock climbing, are suggested to be banned by several opinions. Partially, I consent to the same perspective for reasonable points, which I will elaborate in the forthcoming paragraph.
On the one hand, it is contended that forbidding extreme sports mean decreasing physical activities which is beneficial for body health. Since the lack of physical exercise affect a human body weight, particularly in the children. Published by National Institute of Health, the habits significantly led the children to become obesity was spending time on tablets or video games. Furthermore, the seller of property will be insolvent since the high-priced equipment in assets. Probably, this business included in category of “High-risk high-return investment”, where the regulation would determine how long the market can exist.
On the other hand, we should value more the benefits that this decision may hinder giving players long life disabilities. For instance, spinal injuries and permanent brain damage, even if looks after it using safety apparatus. Cited by some journals, the number of serious injuries has increased, it means the opposite if that sports are prohibited. In addition, the mental health of viewer is protected by watching other sports instead. Witnessing that accident in front of eyes will affect mental balance or commonly called “Victarius Trauma”, this is proven that the people can still be psychologically affected by what they have seen or heard as cited in Australasian Railway Association.
Overall, it seems to me that planning to veto hazardous extreme game, including to enhance probability of players safety from fatal injuries and mental stability of viewer. This is as long as the citizen still keep exercising for better body health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, may, so, still, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52688172043 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97280229319 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648745519713 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5199450831 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.142857143 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113022636646 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363866333023 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462474129369 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659690589013 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355892414451 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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