Some university students want to learn aboutother subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.
Discuss both thses views and give your own opinion.
The students selects a course which they want to study, but the choices of learning few extra subjects really depends upon the individual's interest and motives. Always there are two groups of students who wants to study their own subject in depth and excel, while few who wants to gain their knowledge regularaly in different areas.I strongly believe the one's who goes extra miles to learn something different is the better ones who will reach great levels in life.
The group of students who decided to study a course are mostly fond of their subject and eagers to gain the knowledge in the specific area. They constantly work hard for a scholarship and aim to get univesity top marks. This type of students often ends up stressful and bored because they are too much focussed on one thing for a long duration. They only have updated knowlege about their subjects, apart from that they are unaware which puts them in a difficult situation sometime. For instance, a person who excels academically scored highest marks but when he tend to do the test on computer he tend to fail because of lack of experience.
Nevertheless, the university students who decides to go out of their comfort zone to learn something new and different in order to increase their knowledge to brightens up their future.They tend to come across various information which promotes their knowledge level every day. The individuals are often putting themselves in risk in order to learn something different because it will be worthful finally. For instance, One student who tend to know everything makes sure to time time to study hid main subject also in order to get good grade.
In conclusion, although the students who are focused on their main subjects tend to get high marks but they are not aware of other information, Whereas the students who balances to study the main subject as well as other sujects are able to face the future challenges with courage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'select'.
Suggestion: select
The students selects a course which they want to study, but ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... extra subjects really depends upon the individuals interest and motives. Always there are ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...n the individuals interest and motives. Always there are two groups of students who wa...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...knowledge regularaly in different areas.I strongly believe the ones who goes extr...
^
Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'scored the highest'.
Suggestion: scored the highest
...tance, a person who excels academically scored highest marks but when he tend to do the test o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tends'.
Suggestion: tends
...ically scored highest marks but when he tend to do the test on computer he tend to f...
^^^^
Line 3, column 599, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tends'.
Suggestion: tends
...n he tend to do the test on computer he tend to fail because of lack of experience. ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
... knowledge to brightens up their future.They tend to come across various information...
^^^^
Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: time
...o tend to know everything makes sure to time time to study hid main subject also in order...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, nevertheless, really, so, well, whereas, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87613293051 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52869549209 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540785498489 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0960103663 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.727272727 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0909090909 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252950057656 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991264615651 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675998744091 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174502157058 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399048625193 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'select'.
Suggestion: select
The students selects a course which they want to study, but ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... extra subjects really depends upon the individuals interest and motives. Always there are ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
...n the individuals interest and motives. Always there are two groups of students who wa...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 333, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...knowledge regularaly in different areas.I strongly believe the ones who goes extr...
^
Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'scored the highest'.
Suggestion: scored the highest
...tance, a person who excels academically scored highest marks but when he tend to do the test o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 564, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tends'.
Suggestion: tends
...ically scored highest marks but when he tend to do the test on computer he tend to f...
^^^^
Line 3, column 599, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tends'.
Suggestion: tends
...n he tend to do the test on computer he tend to fail because of lack of experience. ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
... knowledge to brightens up their future.They tend to come across various information...
^^^^
Line 5, column 475, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: time
...o tend to know everything makes sure to time time to study hid main subject also in order...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, nevertheless, really, so, well, whereas, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87613293051 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52869549209 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540785498489 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0960103663 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.727272727 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0909090909 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252950057656 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991264615651 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675998744091 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174502157058 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399048625193 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.