In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?
Recently the issue has been brought into focus is that millions of people on the world are facing starvation and malnutrition despite the breakthroughs in agriculture industry. Some of the primary causes of this problem will be discussed before the most important solutions are drawn.
This problem mainly stems from the gap between the rich and the poor nations. It is true that a great deal of countries saw a big move in agriculture session, however, it is not the case for all. Take, Africa , for example, that people are prone to have diseases namely HIV/AIDS results in the reduction in working efficiency level as well as workforce number. Thus, it is beyond the realm of possibility for them to be engaged in cultivation, which undoubtedly correlate with health crisis. Another reason for this could be the accessibility to shops in terms of transportation and geographical location. It is obvious that food distributor can't be able to transport food to those who are living on the outskirts, where roads are hard to commute and as a result the hungers might have to wait a long time before they reach the destinations.
Difficult as it may seem, there are various solutions that can be implemented to overcome this trend. It is recommend that Governments take action to deter and lessen those fatal diseases and invest more high quality road constructions. What is more instead of every leader jurisdiction responding to what is happening, everyone must treat the world as the giant interconnected system. If coordinated properly, food donations for instance, may help combat the world hunger issue.
All things considered, despite the advancement in agriculture, there is a myriad of people don’t have adequate food owing to indigenous issues and low quality facilitator of access. It is time that we put an end to starvation problem by those above-mentioned resolutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, as a result, as well as, it is true, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12944983819 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99546830813 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614886731392 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2367597899 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.214285714 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207468238296 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650662827862 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440179145174 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116531924611 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035732194716 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.