In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry
It is true that great progress has been made in agriculture, such as enhancing the amount of yields in each field, but as is reported by the media, there are still numerous people who don't have enough food to eat. From my perspective, three reasons can account for this problem.
Firstly, food is difficult to transport in romote villages. With few roads, local residents cannot purchase food from the city and instead they can only eat what they plant. As is known to us all, little vegetables can grow in winter when the temperature is below zero. Thus, people have to store food in autumn, but for some places, winter can be quite long and the only way to solve this problem is to eat less and as a result they easily feel hungry. Secondly, with the population growing rapidly, especially in India, the total amount of food can not satisfy all the people. Naturally, lots of people cannot be provided with enough food. What's more, the disasters may cause this phenomenon. For example, the severe flood might hamper the germination of seeds in spring, giving rise to the death of those plants.
In order to address this problem, there are also three solutions. To begin with, more roads should be built by the government for the sake of connecting those villages with cities. WIth easy access to the town, I believe more people will purchase enough food to go through the winter. Besides, the fields for rice and wheat are supposed to be enlarged to bring more food. Less construction on the countryside enables farmers to expand their fields to gain food. Last but not least, new technology should be implemented and biologists need to create new species which can offer more quantities of food and are able to survive after droughts and storms.
All in all, the reasons why so many people go hungry are listed, and the solutions to this problem are mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75409836066 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38053108467 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5318560941 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.625 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0615725052785 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.020011451857 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409993500179 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0579403914426 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446455887919 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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