Study abroad
It is true that studying abroad in order to pursue the higher education gain the immerse popularity among students. While there are still many issues related to this trend, I would believe that it is more likely to have undeniable benefits.
On the one hand, there are various good reasons to explain for the negative impact of this tendency. Moving to another nation for the purpose of studying can force students live very far from their family which would cost a huge amount of money such as: accommodation, flight, fee tuition and exchange rate. This can result in the financial burden which student’s parents must suffer during their lifetime to supply enough money for their children. Moreover, there are likely to have many unexpected problems such as: health, weather and relationships which students have to deal with in order to reach the great performance. If they do not prepare well with indispensable skills to gain the perfect ability of adapting, these issues can destroy their life balance, make them feel depressed in the long time and even encourage them to commit to suicide.
However, I would argue that these drawbacks are outweighed by its wonderful benefits. Approaching the world-class education in a foreign country is the golden opportunity for students to broaden their knowledge, boost their career path and expand network. In addition, the international environment creates a perfect chance for them to apply their language skills in the real-life situation which can contribute significantly to their language learning improvement. Besides, studying in another nation also cause the environment where students become more and more independent thank to their effort of facing with problems and solving them. For instance, students learn how to take care of themselves, treat well towards people and develop the financial management skill well when they study far from home which can make them reach the high of success in the future.
In conclusion, I agree that the positive points of studying in another country is higher than its problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...der to pursue the higher education gain the immerse popularity among students. While there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23652694611 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68612936675 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571856287425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.4901422347 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.538461538 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128697690556 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513099558731 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844314131772 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106763054161 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642036913975 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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