Task 2. In some countries, more and more adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, there is a significant rise in the number of working-adults who live with their parents. Although this phenomenon entails some drawbacks, I think its value is more remarkable.
On the one hand, there are some demerits that may come to mature workers when living with their families. To begin with, they tend to depend on their parents, which can impair the growth of their personality and experience. To be more specific, adults living far from their parents need to deal with daily life problems such as paying the living cost, preparing dishes and so on and it is initially arduous to overcome but in the long path, they will adapt and be more mature and responsible. In addition, living with parents means grown-ups lost their freedom. While their parents prohibit adults from hanging out lately, skipping breakfast, when living alone they can do whatever at will.
On the other hand, its advantages have can overshadow those analysed disadvantages. Firstly, adults living around their parents are more likely to get rid of the feeling of loneliness. After nerve-racking days in workplaces, adults want to have a trusted confidant who they can pour their hearts out to and parents are always their best choice. However, there is no one standing by them if they live alone so that they are more easily lonely and stressed. Secondly, living with their families can save them a lot of money. For instance, a worker living alone needs to pay the expenses of living, food and so on, which can put a financial burden on him, but with others living with parents, it is not a major issue for them.
In conclusion, in terms of living with parents after being adults, its positive effects have overwhelmed its negative effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90476190476 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5618816405 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568027210884 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9186900358 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364296667489 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137655484889 0.084324248473 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421325705231 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220789421631 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659238676341 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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