Team activities can teach more skills for life than those activities which are played alone. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the world today, everyone spends time and money improving soft skills in order to facilitate working in groups as they can learn more skills and also be effective. However, some people still prefer working alone because other people put a heavy burden on them. From my perspective, I will discuss both aspects of this phenomenon.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that teamwork is becoming an important requirement not only in universities but also in companies. Teamwork allows multiple individuals to work together toward a common goal, which often leads to increased efficiency and productivity, and even they share responsibilities which tasks can be completed more quickly. Moreover, working as a team allows collective problem-solving. When faced with challenges, team members can pool their knowledge and skills to find the best solutions. In addition, through teamwork, people can extend their capabilities and expertise. So, in Vietnam there are quotes that “ We are strong when we are together”.
On the other hand, there are also quotes “ If you want to go fast, go alone." It is true that doing activities alone makes them unencumbered by time and different opinions. They have the freedom to implement their ideas, work on projects without needing approval. They complete control over their work environment, schedule, and decision-making processes. Additionally, working individually offers opportunities for personal growth. To be more specific, it encourages self-discipline, problem-solving skills, and independence from other people. Finally, they can concentrate on completing tasks without the need of frequent collaboration.
Overall, the advantages and disadvantages of team activities can vary depending on various factors such as team dynamics, communication skills and organizational culture.
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...n the other hand, there are also quotes “ If you want to go fast, go alone.'...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, still, in addition, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69818181818 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32274903612 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647272727273 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0707882276 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185792962253 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503211055472 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516337087444 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116898319666 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03678498446 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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