It is a human nature to get influenced by others whether they are friends, colleagues or peers. In my view, I completely agree that fashionable clothes and goods are becoming popular nowadays because people assume it as a way to follow others.
People like to wear same clothes as wear by the person whom they follow. They like to follow actors, sportsmen and when they see them on television, events, influentially, they like to buy same fashion clothes. Moreover, some people think that it will make them cool and public will think that they are big fan of a particular actor.
On the other hand, we can also see that people like to buy goods such as cars, bikes, mobile phones in order to copy lifestyle of another person. They see people roaming in luxury cars, having expensive mobile phones and start to copy them. For instance, in recent news, a person sold his kidney to buy a iphone, he did this because his friend bought same iphone a month ago.
To conclude, this essay discussed how people get influenced by others, buy expensive clothes and items. In my opinion, due to behavior of a person to copy others, clothes and consumer goods are in big trend all over the world.
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- Some people think that what children watch on television influences their behaviour. Others think that amount of time they spent watching television influences their behaviour. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t news, a person sold his kidney to buy a iphone, he did this because his friend ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.663507109 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37159163648 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568720379147 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.7842384785 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.4 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108129805725 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474668648589 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416703424668 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763909786597 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428304697909 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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