In their advertising, businesses nowadays emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
The last few decades have witnessed an escalating rate of companies that emphasize their products to compel more customers. This essay will examine the reasons for this phenomenon and show its main drawback.
The primary reason for this circumstance is that organizations and companies can convince more customers to purchase their products by releasing emphasized advertisements. It stands to the reason that when buyers watch those television commercials and pop ads that are well invested and have meaningful underlying messages, they are likely to find those advertisements compelling and want to purchase them. As a result, there can be a higher number of customers, which means their products have been sold out in a shorter time, therefore enhancing the turnover of the companies and doing wonder for their workforce because they are likely to have a higher salary. For example, toy companies may emphasize their products with far-fetched abilities to compel children, thus, the youngsters may pursue their parents to buy those toys for them.
However, from my perspective, this phenomenon is a negative trend. The main drawback is that customers may buy the things they do not really need. People may squander their time watching emphasized advertisements due to interesting content, colorful background, and well-invested sound. This can make people likely to be compelled and pursued to spend their money buying those products despite the fact that a huge number of them might not be used thereby squandering their time and money that should be spent to do more meaningful things. Take me as an example, after finalizing my homework, I usually browse online-shopping platforms such as Shopee or Lazada and I am attracted by numerous clothes items and cosmetics, thereby purchasing unjustified things and wasting valuable rest time after a nerve-racking studying period.
In conclusion, there are sufficient grounds for the fact that there have been more and more emphasized advertisements, however, I believe that this trade is a negative development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, really, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41795665635 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00961916408 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554179566563 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9426372574 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.833333333 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196228783927 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796140413743 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419663249559 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12012336313 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404606508807 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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