In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way.
Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Most of business try to present a new product to their customers in their advertising and in recent years they have a good tendency toward this. In my opinion, the advertisement is a very good option which businesses use it to show their outcomes and it has various positive aspects development.
On the one hand, companies emphasise to develop and produce a new product because it can help them get promoted rapidly compared other manufactures. One of the most important ways which they can show their goods is advertising. Advertising can help them show their products to different people even related corporates. Not only can it make them get more benefit and sales more goods and products but also, in competitive with other companies and businesses they are prior and it can help them to become an international brand.
On the other hand, although it might raise people's expectations that companies should present new version of their products or new product it helps manufactures to be creatively and use innovation methods to built their products. In addition, by providing various goods advertisements can support more taste and cover more people and nations which it is very useful. Manufactures have many rivals in their businesses that by providing new products by high quality of materials and good price can overcome to others. Hence, it has very good positive aspect. But this makes some companies gain monopoly of some outcomes and get brand then cause remove numerous manufactures.
In conclusion, a very good advertising make lots of benefit and positive in different aspects of businesses. They illustrate their new products by advertising and emphsise their new goods because of its profit. If companies don’t use advertising they could not overcome to other rivals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 276, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'aspects'' or 'aspect's'?
Suggestion: aspects'; aspect's
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Line 5, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... their new goods because of its profit. If companies don’t use advertising they co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16151202749 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8548946309 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481099656357 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9908883657 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307371674371 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125696141261 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798592089579 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224406375091 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509262838223 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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