There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is a common source of entertainment in the world. Different people have different tastes on music, some of them likes to listen traditional music whereas some prefers international music. In my opinion, international music is essential as we can learn a lot from them.
First of all, it should be mentioned that the international music help us to learn about different cultures around the world. One can learn several languages while reciting the lyrics of a particular song. Moreover, international music let us to have different imaginations, that is we can explore our imaginations and feel the music intensely. As for example, when we listen to "The Seasons in the Sun", a song released by a popular boyband "Westlife", we can feel the love towards our family and friends. Similarly, there are many other famous international music that are influencing.
Nevertheless, traditional music are limited to the tradition of a country. Although they have an essential role to play in the society, still traditional music have less value to extend our thoughts. The traditional music help us to understand and learn more about our culture, to know the morals of our life and so on, but those music do not let us know or feel anything other than that.
Overall, international music can give people more benefits than the traditional music. While people need music for recreation and international music are useful for learning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, similarly, so, still, whereas, while, as for, for example, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2085106383 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17112938341 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536170212766 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3725256629 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1538461538 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0769230769 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.496333805564 0.244688304435 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222407030215 0.084324248473 264% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114088445796 0.0667982634062 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.351729174268 0.151304729494 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785123360488 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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